A sidequest for meaning

Chapter 15 and 16 of Red Snow work as a short story. The setting is a fictional medieval world, the cursed are people born with magic abilities. Beraan is a member of the Inquisition, an Order tasked to deal with the cursed. He is looking for answers in one of the major religions. I took inspiration for the Religion from the idea of self-improvement and Jordan Peterson.

Here is the second draft of my novel Red Snow. One sentence pitch would be: Jedi policing mutants in a medieval world confronted by an overpowered Jack the Ripper. English is not my first language and I know I'm in desperate need of a copy editor.