At sentence-level editing now, for the introduction. A tedious stage in which my script is full of comments like
"[XXX shorten?]"
"(XXX? shorter reference?) "
"[XXX combine with next paragraph and shorten?]"
Luckily, I'll manage to stay < 2200 words as things are going.
"[XXX shorten?]"
"(XXX? shorter reference?) "
"[XXX combine with next paragraph and shorten?]"
Luckily, I'll manage to stay < 2200 words as things are going.